Open Poetry #35 |
San Francisco-December 2004 |
Italy Angel Member
since 2003-09-01
Posts 65Northern Ca |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
" remain alive in the city,the sound of the ocean at dawn captures me---with the softness of a tear that idles beneath my lid.And I will write each chapter of my life beside heras grapes bend overthe mountains, fading into a falling sun." I loved this.... know the area and smiled at the "The seasons begin to blur and carry with them the scent of Sonoma wine" Welcome to Pip,even though you've been a member for a while...glad you finally decided to post! |
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Italy Angel Member
since 2003-09-01
Posts 65Northern Ca |
Grazie! I actually forgot. Thank you for your lovely comments. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
IA, that was a fine piece of writing you graced us with! ~ Rich in imagery that touched the senses. I enjoyed your unique and highly poetic turns of phrase. i.e. "with the softness of a tear that idles beneath my lid." Love & Light, EA |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
living in ca myself i know exactly what you talk about i use to live in santa cruz down by the lighthouse, many trips up the coast, love the ocean miss the sounds, the feel and the smell. thanks for a visual and memory and a welcome to pip you shall love it here. many hearts of gold with a lotta soul My spirit will rise |
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freewheelin Member
since 2005-04-09
Posts 53 |
"And I will write each chapter of my life beside her as grapes bend over the mountains, fading into a falling sun." words of fine poetry. truly an excellent write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so vivid and descriptive! wonderful first post! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I am the city's lover. I celebrate and rush towards her shores with an awkward motion, each gustan unspoken longing, lingering, a stirring within. The seasons begin to blur Loved this, and so enjoyed the entire poem, but these words, ahhhh, such spirituality! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Buonissimo! Magnifico! Benvenuto a passions. this is a "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
now that is an entrance, welcome to the blue. looking forward to more sicily devil |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write..and welcome!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cherilyn~ Welcome to Passions~ Enjoyed the nostalgia wrapped up neatly in this flow of poetic thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
very lovely! Lived in that area for a couple of years and it is the most beautiful place I have ever been. You did it justice. and welcome!!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Wine tasting in Napa and a stroll through Pier 39 (when its not so crowded....lol) to watch the seals and eat crab. O.k. that it.....I am going this weekend. You wrote this very well |
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Italy Angel Member
since 2003-09-01
Posts 65Northern Ca |
Thank you to each and every one of you. Yes, that sounds good! How about clam chowder in a sourdough bowl? OR chili in a sourdough bowl? Mmmmmmmmmm....haha! You guys are all very sweet. I have photos here: http://public.fotki.com/CherilynFerroggiaro/ |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
A wonderfoll piece! "The sound of the ocean at dawn captures me" This work has captured me. adagio |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Yes, shall we not forget the clam chowder in a sourdough bowl. those pics are beautiful. |
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Italy Angel Member
since 2003-09-01
Posts 65Northern Ca |
Grazie! I'll be back later to read more. My board's server is having problems and I am at my wits end. Hugs! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
IA, I checked out your photo albums and you have quite the photographic eye! I was especially impressed with the sky shots! You have a lot of grist there for your poetic mill! EA |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
welcome 2 Passion!!!!!! Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
IA A wonderful first post...took me back to the years when I lived in San Francisco. It is a magical place to live, and inspired some poetry from me also. Welcome to Pip! |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Extraordinarily beautiful...glad to see I'm not the only under San Francisco's spell. Keeping this... Welcome. I very much look forward to reading more of your work. "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wonderful first post, Italy Angel~ Welcome, welcome! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A beautiful flow of words...James |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
went through some of your photos, absolutely fantastic work. you have an amazing eye welcome again to the blue |
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Italy Angel Member
since 2003-09-01
Posts 65Northern Ca |
Earth Angel-Thank you. I have a deep love for photography! bslicker-Grazie! Martie- Grazie. Yes, its very inspirational! soul drifter-Grazie! Yes, a spell it is! BluesSerenade-Grazie, I appreciate it. JamesMichae-Grazie! Aenimal-Grazie! Love your name. (reminds me of a favorite tool song) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
well that's only because i named myself after the song/album. bloody hell, yet another tool fan on pip |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Welcome to pips Italy Angel and what a wonderful spill of words you have given us in your first post. Though it has never stepped past fear |
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