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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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And the room feels greater then any human being Time disappears to a contented space Lungs breathe & trace an ageless language Paralyzed trembles clairvoyant Like a finite center of poignant Supremacy of helplessness Undeniable flood, breaching all limits It is there I whisper… Teach my fingers to beat beneath you skin Reading signs and wonders Invisible, falling aloft beneath you Filling the abandonment of centre Scratching nails on seer reality Flight of metaphors…psychic speechlessness Equally in eternal presence Nature’s melody speaks soft reverence Learning to embrace heights of floating octaves With no promises other then to love and be loved Delusional infancy, grasping confidence Cluster evolution’s wings of shaman Born unto the thoughts of man Pastels speaking mysteries of Koran A stronger sense of well being Three dimensional glows fit our nearness Fulfilling mystery’s unconsciousness A lost truth Delights in knowing the unknown Somersaulting deeply into the core An uncontrolled control Uplifting spheres of adeptness, unsure Preserving spirituality of tones Teach me your illuminated rarity Dance with our senses into imagination Thus, motivates the design In this space of discourse, this charismatic transition Love then, are the two voices confessing intimacy Growing toward fanning flames Interacting insights and thoughts Heirs of spiritual promise There I know you, feel your exhilarations Your fears…your needs There.... I know you, then, because you are me...and I you For a moment we are each, our narcissistic self A spiritual pilgrimage sharing our selves |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ All within a birthday suit. LOL enjoyed Good morning sweet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee, that title is just perfect! I thoroughly enjoyed ~ understood and agreed with ~ your poem! When the spirits are connected, the joining of the physical bodies is absolutely sublime!  Linda |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Lee this was truly embossed with shine.... Dance with our senses into imagination Thus, motivates the design Hope |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Equally in eternal presence Nature’s melody speaks soft reverence Learning to embrace heights of floating octaves With no promises other then to love and be loved Every line could stand on its own and still be refined poetry ... Such talent! Love, Margherita  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't write like this, I know I can't so I don't even try... so many thoughts, so many lines that just sink into the mind |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
"And the room feels greater then any human being Time disappears to a contented space Lungs breathe & trace an ageless language Paralyzed trembles clairvoyant Like a finite center of poignant Supremacy of helplessness Undeniable flood, breaching all limits"... Right here, perfection The entire work was captivating...and this sat as a crown. TD |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Always perfection, Lee... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your mind and thoughts and the way you write it totally amazes me~ My spirit will rise |
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