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Open Poetry #35
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-04-17 12:22 PM


Not that much
So different

And still
As yet
Because of it

In love
With her

And not
With you
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2005-04-17 01:15 PM

The differencies are minimal and still ....
so many move on ... because of it...

Love, Margherita

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917
2 posted 2005-04-17 03:35 PM

Sounds like life's old story

Dave
yv
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since 2003-05-30
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3 posted 2005-04-17 03:37 PM

Glorious!  This one put a smirk on my face.  I love all of your work.  It's so simple...yet you capture the essence of your words so magnificently.  Bravisimo!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.
Drauntz
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Los Angeles California
4 posted 2007-04-30 07:42 PM

oh, boy!
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