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Open Poetry #35

Melting Me Softly

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-04-16 06:03 PM

Melting Me Softly

I know that sometimes I seem
doubtful, unsure or nonchalant,
but I totally know what I want.
She has dark silky hair and
milky skin, she melted me
softly until my heart gave in.

JamesLee
April15
2005

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

1 posted 2005-04-16 06:07 PM

THIS IS SO COMPLETELY ROMANTIC!! Whoever the Beautiful One is to have your attentions is a very lucky lady, indeed. Congratulations!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

TexUS
Member

since 2003-03-20

Posts 228

2 posted 2005-04-16 06:36 PM

Oh so sweet and lovely!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-04-16 06:48 PM

melt on James! lovely write!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2005-04-16 07:57 PM

Very nice romantic poem.

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