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Monday Morning Rain is...Nowhere
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Monday Morning Rain is...Nowhere |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
And so goes the horde Down valleys of sloppy school books Staring upways and downways At never-ending paths of Superfluous information and opportunity From and to the sound of Heavy sighing heel-toes and Meaningless beats of self-doubting hearts Shriveled wooden stubs of Creativity boiled down to the Pure cold of steel and let downs All course through the Varicose veins of decrepit Grammar and Vapid nothingness Slushy schoolgirls Drip aimlessly from Beer to bottled boyfriend As the bell rings For another 7 ½ of Rising retardation and Declining expectation P.S. This poem is from my second collection of poetry that I have completed and will attempt to get published...wish me luck in whatever form you believe to be right. Many thanks and graciousnesses. [This message has been edited by yv (04-16-2005 06:17 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope good things happen for you...James |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Thank you, sir. It is verily appreciated. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is wonderful! I do hope you get published...please keep us up to date on the progress wishing you the best of luck |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Thank you very much for the encouragement. It is greatly appreciated. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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