Open Poetry #35 |
Color Me Gone |
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Color Me Gone I color you in my minds ability In colors that change just as the winds It's the dawning of memories that's embraced my wish to forget Where, I can't in a moments weakness And, where time allows me to choose the shade... I color you green in my minds ability In an attempt to visit nature It's my soul absorbed in thought and still surrounded with trees Where, the steps became our familiarity And, where nothing but a blanket held us... I color you brown in my minds ability In a lasting image of serene It's my heart recalling the beach and the sounds never heard like this Where, the ocean was as strong as our emotions And, your hand prints still imbeds the sands... I color you white in my minds ability In an awe of a different light It's the sweetness the waters provided in protection of it's shield Where cleansing my soul also became my friend And, where I leaned against my greatest comfort... I color you blue in my minds ability In a shade unlike any other It's the gentle craving my body had rested upon in all this Where, inside was no longer to far to reach And, where sacred just had no boundaries... I color you remembered in my minds ability In endless love that holds my attention It's the visual of every gem my fingers could hold of you Where, time has seemed to slip them off And, where, now, I color me gone... Sauni Sauni:) I shall allow no man to belittle my soul by making |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
lovely words. liked it a lot. adagio |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It's brilliant in its feel Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sauni, this is sadly beautiful. I love it good to read you once again |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
The rainbow of rememberance and rejection. You leave Michaelangelo in your colorful tracks Saunni. Beautiful. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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