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A New Day [meets] New Again
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A New Day [meets] New Again |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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A New Day [meets]  New Again Simple as a baby’s blink Comes a fast, enticing wink Heard upon the thunder’s storm Quick as night comes to morn Everything begins as new again Old becomes mold, wisped away Stories become legend, given say One wanders aimlessly through a day Allow not my feet to become as clay Everything turns to new again Microscopic notations abound Life is quivering underground Living things reach for the light Then soak in depth the cool of night Everything quickens to new again Not for us to match time’s moments Nor say when we should lose our torments But to take a chance in our desires To flash awake inherent fires Everything comes to new again Join me in the here and now Seek the changes, and I’ll avow To see in my eyes the twinkling scene As everything comes to new again ~*~ For those who have suffered recent losses and pain... moments will soon, someday, be new again. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Tres bien, thanks for allowing me to read this wonderful poem. |
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freewheelin Member
since 2005-04-09
Posts 53 |
awesome, even though my perception kinda clash with the idea of the poem, you put it really well. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And sometimes...we just have to let the light in. hugs M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful thoughts and wise words Karilea. Hugs~Nancy |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Fantastic work begining to end. Will be looking for more. adagio |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very uplifting piece, as always good luck on the move! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Excellent Love the flow Dave |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Sunshine, your internal Light has touched me and I feel as thoug I have experienced an epiphany with this poem. It is very beautifully written, as it meets "A New Day." Lovely...simply lovely. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is a beautiful gift m'friend.  mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, I am glad each day gives us a brand new start. Otherwise, there would be nothing to look forward to. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Love your reminders to watch for the light. Great thoughts and typical Sunshine! Shenachie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
You are my sunshine.  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes let the  in~and the new shall begin~ My spirit will rise |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
When rough patches so often place the pebbles in life, it seems that the difficult days will last forever and moments of joy are fleeting… but it’s important to remember that even in troubled times, “this too shall pass.” There are days of light and joy. Your poem reflects it well, with a smooth flow and guiding picture. Enjoyed this poem! |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
"Old becomes mold, wisped away" The brain kicked in with this line in thinking this was about cleaning the house :-) Wrong again! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the older we grow, the more this becomes so necessary in our lives....love you for this, and thank you....hugs |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea/sissie How I needed to read this...I think I may print it out to read every morning! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts ((hugs))) Charisma |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is truly beautiful writing. I like the word crafting too! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, everyone. Two separate poems, seeming to compliment one to the other. It felt good to revive them, and I'm glad you all enjoyed. |
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