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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-04-15 09:45 AM

A spring flavored morning
finds an old etching of brown
withering away,

past glory sitting
on the branch
where new growth struts,

and this struggle
to understand

the juxtapostion
of all things,

tied in with uncertainties
and illusions of sky writings, fading,

and trying to make shadows fall into place
after they escape their outlines once more,

and how i thought you cared,
but now can only watch the withering browns
lean upon the new patterns emerging,

and you tapped my shoulder once
so far away now, but still here,

you are......

the lost leaves of november
sitting catecorner with the soon to be may musings,

and does anything make sense anymore
after it's gone?

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (04-17-2005 11:20 PM).]

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

1 posted 2005-04-15 09:54 AM

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-04-15 10:16 AM

inkedgoddess
Whatever sense you make of it.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-04-15 10:18 AM

look very deeply...as each sees what is meant for them....

wonderfully written and felt...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-04-15 11:07 AM

"and how i thought you cared
but now can only watch the withering browns
lean into the new patterns above,

and you tapped my shoulder once
so far away now, but still here,

you are......

the lost leaves of november"

Absolutely beautifully written Michele..
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-04-15 04:20 PM

I absolutely love that ending!

freewheelin
Member

since 2005-04-09

Posts 53

6 posted 2005-04-15 10:43 PM

awesome, the last few lines rounds it up really well.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2005-04-16 03:29 AM

You never cease to write beautifully.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2005-04-16 07:32 PM

"the lost leaves of november
sitting catecorner with the soon to be may musings,

and does anything make sense anymore
after it's gone?"

Sometimes it does.....

a great write inky, as usual

mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2005-04-17 09:20 AM

thanks for stopping by and leaving your thoughts

always appreciated

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

10 posted 2005-04-17 08:16 PM

and does anything make sense anymore
after it's gone?

Probably not!

Italy Angel
Member

since 2003-09-01

Posts 65
Northern Ca

11 posted 2005-04-17 11:12 PM

The closing wrapped it up tight. Very nice!

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