Open Poetry #35 |
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Hush |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Hush In my sleeping hours I dream of darkness and faith Running nakedly but fearlessly through His garden, My legs unblemished by the thorns of beautiful white roses--- Invisible is the blood that drips slowly to the ground Leaving a trail of sorrow, sins and unforgiveness; But other things besides thoughts, thirst for freedom Hungrily licking the stains of reality from the ground, Squeezing through the splinter of light in the soul’s eye Causing consciousness to blink and awaken to silence, Body paralyzed by the cool air of the morning, Imagination forming images and voices from fear… Hush, are the whispers shared between brothers Hush, are the screams that explode from memories then into tears Hush, are the lips of God that brush against my wet cheeks Empowering my heart and soul with strength To once again vanquish those internal demons That haunt me in my waking hours. Marcel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very powerful piece Keith |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Superb |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Simply too good to be missed. ~BUMP~ |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
cant believe i missed this~ very good~ My spirit will rise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Hush, are the screams that explode from memories then into tears" this packs a great deal of emotion...well done ![]() |
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