Open Poetry #35 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
And so I am there, reaching inside of me that part which was darkened temporarily and has been lightened, the load beginning to lift. You were there to hold my hand when needed, to rest against shoulder when weary, but I have to do the rest and determine my own future. And if I should fail, it will be my failure and I will own it and wear it until it fades into the past and is shed as a part of learning. I have no love words inside of me, except for myself. I don't expect to hear them anymore nor will I miss them. I am at peace and will romance myself into dancing positive. And where there were disappointments they have been booked in words, no longer clinging to promises but open for tomorrows' gifts. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Someone's going to be filled when they read this....it's beautiful! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"I am at peace and will romance myself into dancing positive. " Incredible line there my friend. Great and enjoyable piece. jimmy |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautifully said strong write as one is meant to be strong with love for self first real love~ not egos lust then one can be stong enough to keep love in as it gives love out that doesnt return as one feels it must at all times, and gives the gift of giving love to man and eases fear which is really evil not allowing knowledge of love to end his scars he refuses to let go and must endow all with pain he feels as an angel falls with no one to mend broken wings that withered away any chance of flying or spreading of wings as a bird in the heavens spreading love so free allowing what we were meant to be ` ` |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice poem, Maureen. You just hang in there, because there is someone very special for you. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Maureen, it is beautiful that one can be at peace with oneself and all that is around them. I hope you are. You deserve that feeling and freedom. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I am at peace and will romance myself into dancing positive. And where there were disappointments they have been booked in words, no longer clinging to promises but open for tomorrows' gifts." Maureen, you have spun a healing song that brigtens and strengtens the heart. Library clicked. ![]() |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
you go girl... Live like it's your last day... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Beautiful thoughts and an answer for today. I pray you can keep up the same strenght to feel this every day. It belongs on your mirror so you can see it every day and remind yourself. best marty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you for sharing this |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I am at peace and will romance myself into dancing positive. And where there were disappointments they have been booked in words, no longer clinging to promises but open for tomorrows' gifts. Oh, lady... these are some of the most positive words I've read... I applaud you!!! |
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