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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Melody drifting on air, sitting without a care. May i stand awhile, within your dream smile. Shores with golden skies, alive with seabird cries. sleep sweetly soft, silent, move in dreams, indolent. The devil stalks me, you will be free. Your repose is everything, blackness, i am sinking. falling into your dream, imediate illumination you beam. Your paradise heaven sent, exciting, your love scent. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was so sad...I see your saddness, and yet feel the love, the happines you get from the other person in this poem...as if they are your source of strength..of light and love. beauty and the beast of sadness...  ~ARh  We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I agree with ARH |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well done! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your descents into love always have soft landings...   EA |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
exciting, your love scent. i'm intrigued by the use of the word scent. i half expected, sent. but you threw me with scent. nice choice... exciting choice.. snow "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Snow, personal comments of this nature about another are not appropriate as comments on someone's poetry. Thank you for your understanding. [This message has been edited by Denise (02-21-2005 11:01 AM).] |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Phil, Glad you were able to read what i said before it was removed. oh how the truth is such a harsh light. i need to learn to be more subtle. LOL. thank you for the card. ~Snow |
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