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Open Poetry #35

oaw oaw oaw

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2005-04-14 03:05 AM

outside my door
amethyst chimes singing
in the ocean breeze

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-04-14 02:07 PM

beautiful

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-04-14 02:23 PM

Lovely.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

TexUS
Member

since 2003-03-20

Posts 228

3 posted 2005-04-16 12:37 PM

Lovely little write...you took me there, and I felt the winds caress...

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

4 posted 2005-04-16 12:49 PM

yery nice liked it

adagio

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

5 posted 2005-04-16 03:24 PM

It must be a year since I have been here.

What a treat to find you, and this lovely haiku!

I can almost hear those chimes. What's more, I can almost hear, smell and see the ocean I haven't seen for so many years.

Thank you!

The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

6 posted 2005-04-17 12:29 PM

thank you new friends and old (hi Rosemary!) I appreciate all your comments very much..

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