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Open Poetry #35

Lust, The Dew Of April

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-04-11 08:36 PM

Imagine as the buds of first Magnolia stretch
Yawn beneath the morning dawn a wink to catch
Enlivened tunes that pulse beneath the blouse of spring
Imagine bathing in the shine of new, a simple thing
That but a few aware might stop and dare a care to bring

Then why, the gentle land of butterfly
To catch my breath in gloves of gold and damp ally
The fawn of skies wish dragonflies to play
A cardinal rule once lost then found and softly tucked away
Then why, came fall to spring again around it all today

And cherry blossoms, pink and white avail
The gentle rains of wayward clouds beneath their sail
And I stand naked in the want of lighter things
Enlivened tunes that pulse the heart as laughter clings
Imagine as the buds of first Magnolia glisten wings and willing listen
Luster

Copyright Kkh 04/11/05

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-04-11 09:14 PM

Kathleen?
The title says it all.

A beautiful write, m'dear. Thank you.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
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2 posted 2005-04-11 09:28 PM

TD

Your words make it happen...so very beautifully! I admire your poetic talent so much...I want you to know that!

majnu

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since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

3 posted 2005-04-12 11:37 AM

gorgeous imagery, and cadence.

it was greatly enjoyed.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-04-12 11:40 AM

BEAUTIFUL writing!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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5 posted 2005-04-12 06:16 PM

a fine piece!

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

6 posted 2005-04-12 08:49 PM

Now this is good! Loved it!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2005-04-13 03:11 PM

"And I stand naked in the want of lighter things
Enlivened tunes that pulse the heart as laughter clings"

yes...in want of lighter things..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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