Open Poetry #35 |
I Am (an introduction and answer to the challenge) |
adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
I am proud and yet afraid I wonder if they will find out Sometimes I hear their thoughts of me I see the eyes of billions stare and I want that they should see-- I am proud and yet afraid. I pretend I am celebrity I feel hands reach out for me I touch the ones not threatening I worry of the others I cry for what's ahead of me-- I am proud and yet afraid. I understand I am to blame I even say it's all my fault I dream the bridge is way too high as I try to fix it all I hope that it will all work out. I am proud and yet afraid. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome to Passions !!!! Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family...you can stop being afraid now. We don't bite. Well, not very hard anyway! It's nice to meet you! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ralph, Welcome to Passions! I've watched - and you're having fun, and smiling already. Please, do not be afraid - for this is a wonderful home of poets, writers, and family...literally! Please be sure to check your e-mail for a very Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS RALPH! I very much enjoyed your first post and challenge. Looking forward to reading more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Nice to meet you~~ M |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome to Passions, adagio! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wonderful first post welcome |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Welcome. You have an intresting style. different is what sepperates you from other poets. resist conformity. Be your self. Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It is nice to meet you and greet you. This is a wonderful first post and I am looking forward to reading more from your pen. I really want to care, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ralph? Thanks for doing this one first--it was and IS a very personal introduction, but I wanted everyone here to see you as I do--vulnerable and yet strong. I am proud too, and I was afraid. But I think you'll do just fine here. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Welcome, Ralph!... What a beautiful and yes... personal introduction... Agreeing with Karen... You'll do just fine here... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a cool entrance. Welcome to Passions, where the welcome sign hangs over the bridge each day. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
glad I found this. it is a very wonderful introduction.. very well done and welcome! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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shatteredsilver Member
since 2005-03-31
Posts 63middle of nowhere |
Hi! I'm a new member too, and that's like I felt. Within the sound of silence... |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This was always one of my favorite challenges. Very telling portrait you have painted here. Welcome to Passions, indeed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
seems you came in the right time to post to the challenge and introduce yoruself, and I'm glad you did. welcome to this home, you'll love it here and I know we'll love to have you here |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
welcome to passions and a very well done executed write....enjoyed and oh, by the way, love your name...adagio...have you ever heard adagio for strings...the ultimate |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You are a wonderful heart and soul, a very strong man with much to share. I am so very sorry you lost your Leah, who was obviously an incredibly wonderful loving lady. When you are ready, I'd love to read some of those 'heart' thoughts you've been carrying around in your head. Take your time, healing is a lifetime happening. May your heart be a strong adagio. |
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