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| Open Poetry #35 |
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Not enough |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Not enough That little rain we had today was not enough to wash away the guilt and shame and sorrow The mark still shows from head to toes we'll try again tomorrow Apologies are mearly words which fly away like startled birds but still I had to speak them We move along 'neath clouded skies with teardrops building in our eyes because again I failed you You cleaned up the mess I made but still I find myself afraid I thanked you not enough adagio  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ralph..that was a lovely apology. I hope she/he sees it and accepts. Good stuff! Hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very sincere write Ralph. Nicely penned.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
aw Ralph...  come visit me and you'll get that in the flesh yanno. and? It's really nice to be able to type that to a fellow poet here at Pip. I think this is wonderful and you are growing as sweetly as your roses.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
adagio Agree with all the above, enjoyed. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I came back to add I am so proud of you. I just read this aloud to Krista and I confess my voice wavered as tears filled my eyes. This is sweet sincerity my friend. I am just so tickled. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is absolutely beautiful, adagio... and?... agreeing with Karen... your sincerity flows freely through your words. Thank you for sharing this... "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A definite keeper... TD |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
because it's just that good, Ralph. I wish my printer worked...pouting |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Thank you Karen for the kind words, and before you ask yes Leah has already forgiven me. And by the way she said she thoroghly enjoyed her stimulating conversation with your rather brilliant daughter last week or whenever that was.  Thanks to all the rest of you for reading. I really appreciate the feedback. adagio |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I don't know what you did Ralph, but if you do it again, you'll answer to ME too.  But if Leah forgives you, so do I. Now give us a visit, will ya? (and you are than welcome, as those "kind words" were well deserved) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write!! JL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
As per Ralph's request... hand-over-heart-hugs I'll never miss her like you do, but I do miss her. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Today's her day. |
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