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freewheelin
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since 2005-04-09

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0 posted 2005-04-09 10:09 AM

What are you, being of the Sea?
Staring at me with that hidden eye,
Like a creature born to dine me,
But with my delight you swiftly die.

I hate you not, but I worship you.
For without you, I am nothing more
Than no-one with nothing to do
But watching you vanish ashore.

Thus I flee away from the sand ashore,
Slicing the Sea surface gliding through,
Against each dying waves whom I adore,
Battling me as my ardor slowly grew.

So keenly in the water I wait and I wait
‘Til you tower behind me before that boom.
‘Til that moment we re’lise there’s no hate,
Just desire to send ourselves to tomb.

And whose sweet voice do I hear?
Her face as fine, cold as her breath
Shadowed by her dark robe of fear,
Her scythe… she’s none other than Death

So come here Death, let me seduce You!
Dance with me! But dare not to fantasise
To take my hand to Heaven’s gate, too.
Here my soul eternally lives, not dies.

Swim with me, Vicious Aphrodite!
As I flee from the shiny sway
Of your scythe with all my might!
As thunder struck, I’ll dance away.

Chase me! Catch me if you can,
With that sleek swaying scythe of yours.
Though with greater speed I ran and I ran,
Adrenaline streaming without a pause.

Still, with great force your blade tried
To take me, but I rid on like a pest
To the sand, where the Wave softly died
And the Sun and Sea shut their Eyes and rest.

Sunshine

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1 posted 2005-04-09 10:13 AM

Still, with great force your blade tried
To take me, but I rid on like a pest
To the sand, where the Wave softly died
And the Sun and Sea shut their Eyes and rest.

~*~

Smiling with this...

Welcome to Passions!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2005-04-09 10:13 AM

Hello freewheelin...this is a very cool poem. Glad I got a chance to read it this morning.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-04-09 10:20 AM

really enjoyed this

welcome to pip!

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
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4 posted 2005-04-09 10:28 AM

There's lot's to ponder here, in your first post Freewheelin.
It had a lovely flow, and evoked some great images.
Much enjoyed.

It was nice corresponding with you.
I hope you enjoy your stay. Welcome to Passions!

Best wishes,
/Kit

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2005-04-09 10:59 AM

Great Read.
Welcome to PIP.

:-)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-04-09 11:17 AM

Very much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2005-04-09 11:30 AM

Please allow me to welcome you to Passions.
I love your chosen pip name.
Your first post is a wonderful piece of work and I do look forward to reading more from you, as I am positive so will others be enjoying them also.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2005-04-09 12:11 PM

I thoroughly enjoyed riding the wave of your words. Welcome!

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

9 posted 2005-04-09 12:13 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

freewheelin
Member

since 2005-04-09

Posts 53

10 posted 2005-04-09 12:46 PM

Thanks for the comments guys, u guys r awesome. this passions site is pretty cool, i wonder where i've been all this time.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2005-04-09 02:07 PM

Welcome to passions...pleasure to read you.
This poem certainly reminds me of someone and I hope he somehow reads it.
Twilight, where the sea and the sun rest...that's the perfect rendering here.

TD

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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12 posted 2005-04-09 04:31 PM

good first post here
much enjoyed

Welcome to Passions