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Carefuling Myself
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Carefuling Myself |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Carefuling Myself Here, where edging of days can bring discourseful thought I careful myself from anger, while hugging pain that is wrought. Rejoice! It was said, by a friend near and dear, in every moment we have, and live it so clear that even your enemies would draw near… just to see the smile. Lips curved at that thought, that whimful want from another, for me, such that care went on spree of smiling and joshing, all in silent, carefuling pull of heartstrings and song sings and chimes drawn so dong ringed… and carefully careful, this carefuling need… was wrought around anger, and pain, and seed… so whether you knew that you needed this, or not… I was carefuling a pull of you into thought and kneaded your tired, your weary, despaired, carefully, carefuling, with sunlight and air… and mentoring memories of all you could see… in the carefuling of life, as it should be. ~*~ For my friends, through their losses. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am carefuling myself as well, but today the storms suit me, and I'm afraid to feel.  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice indeed Karilea. Hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. Thank you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thoughtfully penned.. lovely dear lady~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You are a wonderful sissie!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
  soul sisters do such things |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl slice of your nice ms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kacy said it best... and I agree. Love ya lady. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I was carefuling a pull of you into thought and kneaded your tired, your weary, despaired, carefully, carefuling, with sunlight and air… splendid writing!!!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I needed... greatly. *S* So I beg permission to steal from those for whom it was written... it is bread to the starving. *S* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and live it so clear that even your enemies would draw near… just to see the smile. Lips curved at that thought, that whimful want from another, for me, such that care went on spree"  this is WONDERFUL |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
So often we forget that very thing....to careful ourselves -- love that term for it -- and the ones we love, not to just assume they'll "get it" and that the're automatically just what we want them to be....when our real task is to help them (and ourselves in the process) become what they can be....and love them for that. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
I want to grow up to be like you. |
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