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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-04-01 11:46 AM

You walk between the 2
on a world sized ball
your feet deep dancing
even when the music slows to the sleep mode,
your feet dance
and your neck strains to stay skyward
and not let the body sink
where you may or may not
find absolution in finally freeing the truth;

you take from choice A
and shift gears to choice B
and sometimes behind door #2
a bit of light reflects and bounces
temporary salvation, but most times
the choices inevitably become albatrosses

but you do it

guiltfree most days,
because it is what it is,

you realize by now,
no one has your back
and you do it regardless
as the choregrapher becomes you.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-04-01 11:55 AM

outstanding, Mish
ballet on a tightrope

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-04-01 12:28 PM

smiles, very much enjoyed
Happy Friday Inky

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-04-01 12:34 PM

Excellent write Michele..enjoyed the read.
Hugs~N

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2005-04-01 04:22 PM

good write

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-04-01 05:43 PM

cool write

love the ending

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2005-04-01 08:19 PM

Oh the sway is sublime...
Liked the second verse best of all...you have some stellar thoughts there kiddo.
TD

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2005-04-02 08:14 AM

Inky
An exotic dancer comes to mind when I read this....

Perhaps I am way off, and it is the mind of a dirty old man that has urged them into configurations of a scantly clad dancer?..

Anyway, the poem is well done, in form and content.always a pleasure to read your words...

__________ice/ford
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bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2005-04-07 04:53 PM

A bump>>>>>> for old times sake!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2005-04-07 05:05 PM

thanks a bunch guys and gals

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2005-04-07 05:06 PM

yea bboy
a bump and a grind would be nice right around now

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