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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2005-04-01 10:31 AM

Sifting through the stinking strewn garbage,
she comes across a memory so sweet
It nearly cancels the myriad of offensive odors
released by years of frustration and anger.

One solitary moment of resistance holds firmly,
tenaciously clings to her blistered brain.
An "I love you" surfaces briefly amidst all the pain.

But whose voice is attached?
She can no longer calculate the impact,
nor appreciate the intent held within his voice.
And so she lets go of all
the garbage.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2005-04-01 11:09 AM

thats a bitter pill
but a dose of truth has its merits too

on occasion

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

2 posted 2005-04-01 11:34 AM

This is so full of truth. Awesome write.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2005-04-01 11:01 PM

"One solitary moment of resistance holds firmly,
tenaciously clings to her blistered brain.
An "I love you" surfaces briefly amidst all the pain."

Great write Kacy, but ya need to stop hangin' out around dumpsters...

Buy ya a beer???

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-04-01 11:39 PM

OMG, but I have really missed you!!!
yep, or a whine or wine, whatever...you can buy me a glass of agua fria (cold water, prolly misspellled LOL)

now, what were we talkin about???? LOL

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-04-04 11:30 AM

But whose voice is attached?

~*~

Kacy...one of the

s, this is!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2005-04-04 01:52 PM

Kary said it...
what a

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2005-04-04 04:31 PM

Great write!

Eric

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2005-04-04 10:43 PM

thanks for reading my garbage

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2005-04-06 11:31 AM

lol....Gawd Kacy I would read anything you write and NEVER consider it to be garbage, but always more than worthy of a read and often times a second read. Hugs to ya lady!!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2005-04-06 11:52 AM

LOL, hugs to you, sweet Gentle Spirit!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2005-04-06 06:27 PM

"tenaciously clings to her blistered brain"

what a great line!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

12 posted 2005-04-06 06:31 PM

Really strong and real.....Good one...!

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