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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2005-04-05 01:22 PM

The sweaty tendrils are yet to dry and slide
from their gripping torture upon raised hairs
you are fresh in mind, deep in thought
we lay in love~made yellow, didn't we?

Teetering stalks of flowers you would buy
if only I hadn't thought of it first
I can taste the remorse, mind you,
like pollen, pulsating across the miles

I would try to drink it
but I am full.

And I know you're sitting still, with thoughts
that only race you from limb to lesion
wondering where to strike, I cut deepest don't I?
Further than the angry red that itches you in the night
that never quite fades to white,

As love affairs go, you were not my finest
weaving patterns for me to follow

As love affairs go
I lose another to pity and triumphant anger
that you spilt~all over me
dazzling me awake, from rapid dreams.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2005-04-05 02:07 PM

well you still have that powerful way of knocking me on my a$$ :-)

great job.

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-04-05 02:13 PM

Powerful stuff Gemjop, well done gal!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-04-05 02:22 PM

Dear Gem Drop, you certainly can raise a few hairs on me with your exquisite poetry.

Gosh, yer good!

Glad to see you back posting.

Hugs with Love,
Lindy

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2005-04-05 10:26 PM

biting,
the bastard probably deserves it and a lot more
you have my empathy

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2005-04-06 04:20 PM

it's the worst ones that haunt the most..hoping you break the pattern you deserve so much more

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2005-04-06 04:32 PM

Oh a gripping write Gem, taking a firm hold of the reader.

more please....

Mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2005-04-06 05:37 PM

This reminds me of a conversation I had with a guy once about "numbers". Wish I could share it in here..

I miss you when you are gone.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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