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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Fragile Hearts Well we all know that time rolls on And weeping hearts grow old While the opaque minds they wander When southern nights grow cold But the dreams of love they linger In memories dulled but not forgotten Left only now to reminisce the days When fragile hearts did soften So I look aloft, beyond the stars And seek guidance from above Hoping one day to remember What it was like to love "A spring shower was cause to run |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
soft manipulates the essence...unto a better place... simply lovely |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a beautiful soft write, and remembering is almost as good as the real thing... I think  ~smiling~ M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a melancholy write Eddie. But oh how wonderful to read you once again. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"While the opaque minds they wander" events in the past can carve strong pathways in one's head leaving lasting passages Lovely write here! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
This is so beautiful. Such powerful words. Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed , Dreams of love linger .... yes they do and I am always reminiscing Hope |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awesome! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beyond the stars And seek guidance from above Hoping one day to remember What it was like to love''' ~ oh how I can relate so well to this....nicely said....  ~~*~~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
LeeJ ~ Thank you! M ~ Sometimes the remembering is all you have! Thank you. Nancy ~ The melancholy comes all too easily for me, thank you for stopping by! Janette ~ always special to have your thoughts, thanks! Heather ~ Glad you enjoyed. Hope ~ yes, they do linger don’t they! vandana ~ I don’t think its that good, but its good to know you liked. Thanks. Passing Shadows ~ I thank you for your exuberance! Greeneyes ~ Its saddens me that you can relate so well, take care! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And weeping hearts grow old Yes... I can see me doing just that. *S* But some memories are so strong I think they'll survive as long as breath does... to remind me why I exist... why I breathe. *S* Beautiful write!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
From title through verse, a gentle and honest rendering. Well done. TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eddie How beautifully honest and heart touching this is.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May you soon be making warm memories for your tomorrows. Nostalgic and wistful ~ and softly expressed. Love & Light, EA |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
This was awesome, Eagle One, feeling every word!!!! ~ Becka |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You know this one touches me |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Suthern ~ yes, some memories are that strong, they survive, and I’m glad they do! Thank you for your thoughts, take care! TD ~ thank you for your thoughts, appreciated! Martie ~ thank you, always a treat to know you’ve stoped by! EA ~ ah yes, those soft warm memories….sigh! Thanks! Becka ~ to know people feel my words is indeed a special thing, thanks! Paula ~ yes my friend, I do. Appreciate you stopping by, take care! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
No doubt you will...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beatiful. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
James ~ Yes, I do believe I shall! SmartChick ~ Glad you enjoyed! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"...Hoping one day to remember What it was like to love" Oh Eddie...it is grand, my friend! I wish "Love" on ALL my friends! Great write... hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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