Open Poetry #35 |
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Times Three |
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Sunshine
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Times Three Reminded, times three today, by way of corresponding lines of lives who have touched me true and this, yes this, would share with you of a witty play which in rushing forth with courses that rut life in course, of endings coming far too soon to those living light and pleasure, to those who bring such to others around them whether by smile, or wile, or Wit or ordinary, ornery gaiety… or through poetry or writings, or filmed imaginations, whose most thoughtful ponderings akin to them, those who find wisdom in lexis and logic, and damn from each one short courses to death that tear from us time to time that we would discover more… so I call again words long gone which live for me in links to Donne and heed the sounds which hold head high Death... be not proud… And death is not, for here, now, see the loves I hold in friendships three who fight and rally in harmony and dwell not in what might be but what would cast a pall over death and fight their best until it be their choice to rest… nay, fear death? I and they, we fear thee not… for memories shall never rot, as merry is to merry who be, and face in new beginnings a kinder and gentler revelry. ~*~ Dedicated to three who will always be survivors; to one in the East, one in the South, and for Terri, and for what they have laid down in their paths…. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
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![]() ![]() {I'm a suvivor}~Reba |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you Karilea. Hugging you in understanding. |
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Ericc Member Elite
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A truly awesome write. Eric |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you, kind lady... ![]() |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie Such a beautiful heart you have! ![]() |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Enjoyed the wrtite. I liked these lines. "to those living light and pleasure, to those who bring such to others around them" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this... *shaking head* wow |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
memories shall never rot....no truer words have ever been spoken. There are two times they hold importance in our lives - making them and recalling them. There is nothing more precious...except, perhaps, your words... |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read ![]() |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent....form and content... Enjoyed __________ice ><> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, I go along with Balladeer on this one. You are my sunshine ![]() |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Regardless of your subject, I always find a peacefulness in your writing. Hugs KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
for memories shall never rot, How very true... and with each recall, we're sustained. Excellent write!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
beautiful heart showing here - ![]() If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
How did I miss this?!! Awesome Karilea. hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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