Earth Angel
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2005-03-31
09:51 AM
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RAINBOW LIGHT~ Linda L. Dowd ~ If I could put rainbows in bottles, I’d send them around Mother Earth. Gifting each man, woman, child, With light of immeasurable worth. Red, orange, yellow and green rays, And indigo and violet there be. ~ Bands of heavenly colors, And some that we can’t even see. Every one sees their own rainbow, ~ Their own view of refracting light. It depends on where they are standing, And the angle of colors in sight. Light bouncing off falling raindrops, Is interpreted by each person’s eyes. But everyone loves to see rainbows, ~ Colored bridges spanning blue skies. If I could put rainbows in bottles, I’d send them around Mother Earth. Gifting each man, woman, child, With light of immeasurable worth.
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Jessie Carstein
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2005-03-31
09:54 AM
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An interesting piece, I liked the ideas of bridges and the way it spans the skies, almsot makes you feel like you're climbing somewhere on the rainbow.
Structurally I found the rhyme scheme a little jarred, the words themselves rhymed, but there seemed to be an inconsistent set of syllables that hurt the piece.
God work though
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choshi
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2005-03-31
10:00 AM
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Oh my, what a life-affirming wish for humanity.....Thank you ~Paul
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Earth Angel
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2005-03-31
10:03 AM
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Jessie ~
Thank you for dropping by and leaving your thoughtful reply. I appreciated all of your comments!
I found it rather difficult to put my rainbow thoughts down in a flowing manner ~ especially the stanza on the colours of a rainbow!
Love & Rainbow Light, EA
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Earth Angel
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2005-03-31
10:06 AM
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Good morning, Choshi!
Your enthusiastic response to my poem gifted me with a rainbow! Thank you, Paul.
Love & Rainbow Light, Linda
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Dautz Write
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2005-03-31
10:09 AM
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If I could put rainbows in bottles, I’d send them around Mother Earth. Gifting each man, woman, child, With light of immeasurable worth
I think you just did. Thanks for the colorful write.
Dautz
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suthern
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2005-03-31
11:44 AM
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This is just what my day needed... thank you! *S*
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Earth Angel
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2005-03-31
01:47 PM
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Dautz ~
That was sweet of you to say! Thank you!
Love & Rainbow Light, EA
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Earth Angel
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2005-03-31
01:51 PM
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suthern ~
I am sending this rainbow just for you!
Love & Rainbow Light, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-31-2005 10:40 PM).]
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Mistletoe Angel
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2005-04-02
09:26 PM
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(does happy pot of gold dance) Awwwwwww, you know how I love rainbows soooooooo much with the way I love psychedelia, tie-dye, Rainbow Dancer, etc, yay! (smiles) You do exactly that, dearest friend, and it doesn't come from a bottle, it comes from your prism heart, where you truly are an angel that influences and comforts the world with your I-Thou relationship to everyone, regardless of their differences and makes them feel loved! (wipes a warm tear) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are the epitome of a friend anyone would be blessed to have in their life, and I am lucky to be one, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!
May love and light always shine upon you!
Love, Noah Eaton"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"
Mother Teresa
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Earth Angel
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2005-04-02
09:33 PM
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Aww, Noah, your reply was a poetic piece of art that touched my heart. I value your friendship as well ~ and I am saving this thoughtful and artistic response to my special folder of highly meaningful responses and poems that my Pip friends have written for me!
Thank you for this!
Hugs with love, Your forever "angel" friend, Linda
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saved_by_grace
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2005-04-02
09:49 PM
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DANG GIRL!!! I don't know why...but this one brought tears to my eyes. Your writing is ALWAYS so beautiful...I know when I click on a EA link...I will never be disappointed!!! Thank you for sharing this treasure from your heart!!
Hugs , Earth Angel...and God bless you ALWAYS!! ~ Becka
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Earth Angel
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2005-04-02
09:56 PM
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Becka ~
That is one of the most wonderful responses that I have ever received!
Hugs with love, Linda
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