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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-04-02 07:56 AM

Compensation

I compensate what I don’t know
By finding places I can go
I walk among the scenes of green
Collecting flowers of each mean

And many a bouquet I’ve made
To set before a pretty maid
To capture flights of butterflies
The color of their pretty eyes

There’s nothing like their lovely smile
To sip within a lovely wile
And make them laugh in sheer delight
The fumbling awkward of a knight

And I would ask a favors wear
To tie about my head to bear
To keep within my heart of prime
Forever tie the sands of time

And so I compensate the thaw
The ever changing of the store

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

1 posted 2005-04-02 08:09 AM

excellent rhyming, sey. loved this part:

To keep within my heart of prime
Forever tie the sands of time

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2005-04-02 08:52 AM

And many a bouquet I’ve made

And you make them still... every day... for us with your words. *S* And I, for one... thank you! *S*

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-04-02 08:57 AM

Your showers of thought
will May flowers wrought!

A beautiful bouquet of lexis, Sy...
blossoms to see beget an apple pie...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-04-02 09:00 AM

"And many a bouquet I’ve made
To set before a pretty maid
To capture flights of butterflies
The color of their pretty eyes"

Oh my yes...much enjoyed the read this morn Sy.
Time for a cup of tea?
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2005-04-02 09:39 AM

J.Samm
A welcome comment, thank you.

suthern
You can't kid me "Some fumbling awkward of a knight" Hasn't been at your door.

Or is it a special knight?

Sunshine
LOL The apple pie of my I?

Nancy,
Hugs and tea, Yes.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2005-04-02 09:59 AM

Lovely write to brighten up this miserably wet and cold day in Ontario. Thankyou for this Seymour. Hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2005-04-02 11:33 AM

Chris,
I hope it clears up.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2005-04-02 06:25 PM

And I would ask a favors wear
To tie about my head to bear

tis why we crowned you our King of Way Cool Cadence.

To keep within my heart of prime
Forever tie the sands of time

that goes both ways me sweet Sy-babers...
right straight to me mothy

*ww*

It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away.

Martie

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California

9 posted 2005-04-02 07:41 PM

Sy

"And many a bouquet I’ve made
To set before a pretty maid
To capture flights of butterflies
The color of their pretty eyes"

If I still owned a flowershop, I'd hire you to make them ....I would put a very high price on them too, because they are a part of you.