Sadelite
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2005-03-30
09:37 AM
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She slipped upon a paper trail Piled ads, paid bills to fall within a file
Not to paper drown Arose soft head Viewing stacks around
Delicate in her rise Again, teeter-tottered stack Billowing tail, a willow above her back.
Padding desk, attention seeking cat Sidles across blue field Static fur graying black.
Silly feline pounces lap Playing keyboard Tap, trip, tap! (No file could contain our Caitlin Cat!)
[This message has been edited by Sadelite (03-30-2005 10:15 AM).]
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Seymour Tabin
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2005-03-30
09:49 AM
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Sadelite Enjoyed the read.
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Gentle Spirit
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2005-03-30
09:54 AM
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A delightful tale with a wonderful flow. very well done!
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Sunshine
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2005-03-30
09:57 AM
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Sadie...
and that is exactly why I miss the purrers...
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Sadelite
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2005-03-30
10:12 AM
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Seymour, Glad you enjoyed. It is always a pleasure to see your name.
~sadie~
Gentle Spirit,
Thanks for stopping by. I'm pleased you enjoyed my little cat tale.
~sadie~
Sunshine,
I bet you do miss the little purrers! I swore I would never like a cat, but since Caitlin has been around, she has changed my mind about that! She's almost seventeen! Since her "master" (I laugh about the choice of words) has left, she has adopted me to master! Glad you could relate.
sadie
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passing shadows
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displaced
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2005-03-30
10:50 AM
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I miss my kitties too
enjoyed the write
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suthern
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2005-03-30
01:20 PM
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I miss my little "helper" so much... I may have less typos now... but that was small price to pay for the purr. *S*
Smiles for you and your Caitlin... may she continue to inspire you! *S*
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BluesSerenade
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2005-03-30
02:52 PM
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Cats have a mind of their own, and don't have a second thought that we love them just the way they are. It's good to be queen or king, as the case may be.
Fun write, Sadie~
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The Jackal
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2005-03-30
05:01 PM
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nice playful feel to thisNew lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire
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Martie
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2005-03-30
05:59 PM
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Sade
I sure do know what you mean....this was delightful!
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Ratleader
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2005-03-30
10:00 PM
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Sweet! I can just see it!~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
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2005-03-30
10:04 PM
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Excellent!! Very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~NancyFor it was not into my ear you whispered But into my heart It was not my lips you kissed But my soul
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Susan
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2005-03-31
03:15 PM
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thanks for the gift of the smile
SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .
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Goodknight
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2005-04-12
05:40 PM
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Enjoyed this a whole lot Sadie - you write so well - Paul
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TexUS
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2005-04-12
07:47 PM
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So charming, a pleasure to read!
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EvocativeVerse2
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2005-04-12
09:04 PM
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Love this...absolutely love it! Reminds me of my puppy.
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Magnus
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2005-04-12
09:17 PM
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You said it right in that she adopted you. Cats can be either a pain or the greatest blessing...I am blessed with two...they are a treat.
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Sadelite
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2005-04-12
09:45 PM
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Thanks everyone for responding to Caitlin's poem. I see that we have a lot of cat lovers here! I never was one until she convinced me! Pesky cat!
sadie
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froggy
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2005-04-12
10:37 PM
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Sounds like my cat Aurora Marie. Enjoyed the read.
:-)
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Earth Angel
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2005-04-12
11:10 PM
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A delightful cattail ~ I mean cat tail! Ooops-a-daisy, cat tale! lol
Warm hug ~ warm smile, EA
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