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Open Poetry #35

hell's hailstorm

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2005-04-12 07:45 PM

Caught in hell's hailstorm

a tongue lashing of hot spit;
fire and brimstone face.

No where to go
but out the door.

That’s when a gentle mist fell

and melted the heat of the moment
into puddles of hope.

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

1 posted 2005-04-12 08:55 PM

Neat series of images with an upbeat ending. Nicely done. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2005-04-12 08:58 PM

I like this one. Makes me smile.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2005-04-12 08:58 PM

thanks, friends!

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

4 posted 2005-04-12 10:40 PM

freeze them and save them for a, um, Dry day?

always a rainbow somewhere

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

5 posted 2005-04-12 10:52 PM

LOL, good idea, Reb!

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