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In Castle High |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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 Photo From Webshots In Castle High ~ Linda L. Dowd ~ +*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ As ebbing tide, leaves sandy shore, My dreams drift out to sea, ~ A kaleidoscope, of wish and hope, With prayers they'll come to be. Perhaps one day, a prince will come, To my heart, he'll hold the key. He'll kiss my lips, then on his ship, We'll sail across the sea. In castle high, against blue sky, My prince will marry me. In satin gown, with diamond crown, A princess I shall be! +*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-28-2005 11:12 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So lovely Linda! I really want to care, |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I am reminded of Cinderella with this piece. You dream nice dreams..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beatiful thoughts Linda, but in my case, won't hold my breath, could be fatal...hehe hugs and happy Monday |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna ~ Thanks, Hon!  Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pegasus ~ You comment about Cinderella sent me on a search for a castle to add to this post! Thank you! I think it adds a nice visual touch to my poem!  ~ May it be your dreams of sweet that come true! EA |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
This was SOOO beautiful, Linda!! This would be my dream....  God bless... Becka |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lovely Lee ~ No, please don't hold your breath! Your prince may come with the next intake of fresh air!  Love & Light, Linda  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Becka ~ ~ and so it shall be! Swish, swish with my magic wand!  Love and Castles In The Sky, Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You're already queen of our hearts, dear lady. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern ~ To be called a queen by a queen, is indeed a fine thing! I am royally flushing! ~ I mean, "blushing"!  ~ May your king soon find you!  Linda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Lovely! Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric ~ Thankya kindly! Linda  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Well, it doesn't hurt to wish! Lovely photo to go with this little fantasy too.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Howdy, Pilgrim! You've been conspicuous by your absence! It's good to hear from you! This was a fantasy that broght magic to my life when I was a girl growing up! EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Linda!! This is so very pretty. Love your title, and the picture too. Is that Hearst Castle? |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Beautiful dream, Linda, loved the ballad form... Oh, BluesSerenade, the castle is the Neuschwanstein Castle in the Bavarian Alps. The Sleeping Beauty Castle in Disneyland has been modelled after it.  CG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lori ~ I see that CastleGuard has answered your question! Thanks for dropping by! May you be swept off your feet by your Prince Charming and carried to his Castle high above the madding crowd! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
CastleGuard ~ Aha! You finally found me poem! I kept thinking that if you were to see the title, that you'd pop in for a peek! lol Thank you for answering Bluesy's question! ~ and for the nice response to my poem! Good Knight! EA |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
You're welcome, Linda, I was hoping you would not mind me answering the question...castles are my passion, well, one of them...LOL P.S. I did see your poem earlier...it took a while to climb the hill..... CG |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i would guess you worked on this for a while, but the rhyming seems effortless. nice. -majnu |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Yes, good use of internal rhyme. CG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
CG ~ Hmmm! I wonder what other passion you might be referring to!  Since you finally made it to the top of the hill, I suppose you are now King of the Castle! ~ and not just a Guard of it! ~ On a clear day, you can see forever! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, manju! It's good to hear from you. I try my best at having my poetry flow ~ I guess it's the music in me! EA  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
CG  EA |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
We all need reminders that dreams can come true. This dream sang like a song, and I like the picture of the castle, too. Me thinks our Earth Angel has her prince! hehehe ......jo[This message has been edited by iliana (04-05-2005 06:00 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
A very romantic tale, Linda and here's hoping it comes true! Ah, to be a princess living in a castle with a royal coach awaiting. Hugs dear Lady. Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
iliana! Ahhh! There you are my lovable lily jo! I've been missing you! I'm looking forward to our next chit chat! We've got some catching up to do! Love & Lily Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marvellous Marti ~ As you know, I did find my prince. Actually, he found me! ~ and I am so thankful he did!!!!!!! I just wish it hadn't taken him so long to find me! Oh well, better late than never! Now I really am a princess ~ or at least treated like one! I hope you are well. I've been thinking of you, my friend. Loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
And, a lovely princess you will be. With a kind and gentle heart. [This message has been edited by SmartChick (04-05-2005 11:57 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet Sue, I thank your for such a sweet reply! Linda |
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