Open Poetry #35 |
Walking Rainbows |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Repost Walking Rainbows I’ve walked on rainbows several times In paintings and in poetry rhymes But never have I found a vend That took me to the very end. I’ve tried and tried in false and true To paint a portrait true of you But never have I found in store That absolute that is your core Veil on veil I’ve torn away Yet still another cloak would stay. Each moment turned to something new. Beyond a clue in witless view Your mist enfolds my oversee Allusions froth with mystery A golden haze with fires core That burns and holds my soul in awe. And so this fired torch remains And my fantasy still reigns. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And so this fired torch remains --------------------------------- and so this moth will still fly in your flame. *L* Sy-babers...your rhymes ARE the rainbows end. It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I’ve tried and tried in false and true To paint a portrait true of you But never have I found in store That absolute that is your core oh damn Sey, I am relating to this one today... yanno? You are pure poetic rhyming perfections dear!! I really want to care, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a beautiful write dear Sy! It is a joy each morning to read your wonderful rhymes. This one is extra special. ~Morning hugs,....and tea, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful write to match a beautiful spring day! hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Veil on veil I’ve torn away Yet still another cloak would stay. Each moment turned to something new. Beyond a clue in witless view Your mist enfolds my oversee Allusions froth with mystery A golden haze with fires core That burns and holds my soul in awe. ~*~ So on this beach I do beseech an understanding of what we seek when looking through the veil of mist a golden light ... a lover's kiss... You smooth talker, you! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., your poem was magical. I am sending you a magnificent rainbow for you to walk on! Mind you, you have to share it my Care Bear friend! He's as sweet and cuddly as you are! Love & Rainbow Light, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is simply beautiful, my friend... *S* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it...but I think I will try walking a rainbow myself and see where it ends... M |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Stunning Sy! hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now c'mere you fiery cuddlebear... You delight my heart, sy. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"the absolute core is you, Sy!" A core of passion and hope-- sadie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You always say the right thing, love it *ww* Gentle, Love you too. Nancy, Hugs back always. Chris, You are a dear. Sunshine You will always be my sunshine. Earth Angel Thank you and I'll be careful. Hugs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you sweety. Maureen, Good idea, Marti, Hugs back. serenity, And you delight mine. sadie, A delightful comment. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Simply beautiful, Sy. As always. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you dear. |
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