Open Poetry #35 |
Lost and Adrift |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Photo From Webshots LOST AND ADRIFT ~ Linda L. Dowd ~ Shadows now linger where sun had once shone, And gone are the sunrises of past golden dawn. My faith, it does wane, with the fading of light, As I slip into the dark of an unending night. I dissipate into an encompassing fog, And am swallowed down into a bottomless bog. My dreams have all plummeted back down to earth, For I've lost my élan and my displays of mirth. No longer do I, hear the nightingales sing, Nor the laughter of children ~ or church bells ring. The moon and the stars cease to light up the sky, ~ They’re hidden by nimbus that rain tears I cry. The strength has been drained from my body, mind, soul. And all that remains is small fraction of whole. I am lost and adrift on dark river of gloom, I’m the bud of a rose that never shall bloom. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-25-2005 03:22 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Dear readers, this is just me writing from the shadows of the moon. Love & Light, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Asleep or awake you write like an angel. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Asleep or awake you write like an angel. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Mr. T. ~ You say the sweetest things ~ twice! lol I see your reply came up two times! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Ericc Member Elite
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Beautiful written and deeply felt. Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Our Earth Angel in a bottomless bog?? I think not!! Nay never you m'dear. ~Sending bog clearing hugs your way, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Such versatility you have in writing mood setting poetry! You can lift my spirits up or down with just the angle of your pen! It is always a pleasure to read your poetry whether the tide is high or low. miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Eric ~ That poem may have flowed from my pen ~ but not from my heart. I enjoy writing outside of the box. Mind you, I had felt "Lost and Adrift" at one point in my life ~ but I never did lose my faith that all would eventually turn out for my higher good. And it always has! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Nancy ~ You truly are enchanting ~ and adorable like a little garden fairy! Hugs with love, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Miss C ~ You write such thoughtul and interesting replies! ~ and I have appreciated each and every one of them! Loving hugs, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I’m the bud of a rose that never shall bloom. Oh... I love this!!! I'd highlighted several lines that could be my own... but this... the sadness for potential not fulfilled... that's just incredible. *S* Whatever shades you choose, your palette always produces a painting to treasure. *S* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Linda, This was so beautifully sad...and perfect. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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suthern ~ Thank you, Belle! I thought I'd let my "halo" slip a bit and explore some shadows! lol I am pleased that you enjoyed it! I really enjoyed reading your comments! Love ya! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Susan C ~ Yes it is sad, isn't it! I darn near cried myself after I read what I had written! Now where in hades did that one come from! Warm hug from "Found and Floating"! Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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each of us have sadness in us as well as love and happiness it's good to write it out sometimes even though the writer doesn't really feel it, it's still from the heart |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww, this sounds sad. Still, you write beautifully. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Linda.....I've been feeling it, too. *hugs* But, I'm okay and hope you are, too. KBHBLY ...... jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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One Whose Shadows Are Passing ~ Dixie, I really appreciated receiving your thoughtful and indepth reply. Thank you, Darlin'! Hugs of love, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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S C ~ Hi, Sweet Sue! That was sweet of you to say! Hugs 'n oodles of strudels! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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iliana ~ Gosh, its good to hear from you ~ and I look forward to our next telephone conversation. I value our friendship ~ and you! Love you lots! Linda |
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