Open Poetry #35 |
Thundering (from the ramble series) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I only can write what lies inside these feelings I can no longer deny. It rocks and rolls me to the edge but that damn far I don't think I can bend. Passions fire still lingers and I burn in your flame and I still ask myself who the hell is to blame. I've exposed my 'me' to the very core but you keep taking and pushing for more. I've taken each word that you've lied and tossed each one out to the side, I'm a tethered soul now torn apart unable to escape the thunder of heart. I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-23-2005 08:48 AM).] |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very good and intense write... enjoyed reading this... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It rocks and rolls me to the edge but that damn far I don't think I can bend. You'd be very surprised what the mind and soul can do, once they join and put they're gusto behind it....miraculous writing lady jane....enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes! I feel this. Very much so. Well done Donna. hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Ah so powerfully felt....~P |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks much all and hugs. I realized there were other loves I knew, and then there was you.....Trace |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very powerful rambling ramble on! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks much Dixie, appreciate the support. I might be going crazy but going there is keepin me alive. Living makes it clear I'm just stuck right here trying to survive. Eddie/Troy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds like all take no give... on the other side. Stand tall, bend willowy... and spring back. Those willow limbs can sure sting in their lash. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you ladies, for your smiles... Hugs. |
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