Open Poetry #35 |
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...Hold me... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. ![]() |
![]() Perhaps tonight if you don't mind could you would you...just hold me? Just for this evening this one time.. no need for talk about our day and what others had to say.. please let your love surround me enfold me ~ just let me be. In your arms I feel sheltered protected nothing can harm or hurt me.. I am free of all pain and the world is at peace. There will be time to talk to laugh to discuss our lives and decide which path we need to travel but now, for tonight please just hold me? |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, I am certain he will. Beautiful Teed. Hugs & Miss Ya!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy "Perhaps tonight if you don't mind could you would you...just hold me?" This is needed so often, and gets lost in the daily termoil of moving too fast. I've missed your poetry so I'm very glad to see this post today. ![]() [This message has been edited by Martie (03-23-2005 09:13 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Nancy, it is soooo good to see you post and you bless us with such a beauty as this... super hugs to ya lady! ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Chris, Martie, Karilea & Donna. Thank you so much sweet ladies...and sister o'mine. It has just been one of those days yanno? And I'm sure you know the feeling of just wanting to be held. Big hugs and thank you. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Those quiet times when words are not needed are the most meaningful of all! Love the romance, Nancy~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how gentle this is touching piece |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bluesy and Dixie Gal...Hugs and thank you both!! ![]() |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugssss pretty lady...... I am sure the reward will be tender.... good to see ya posting... ![]() ~~*~~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enchantress~ OH ... do I ever understand this one~ And *smiling here* ... the answer from my Bill is always, "Your very wish is my next action." ![]() I'll be sharing this beauty with him~ Thank you for the lovely of you~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful, Nancy. And, I hope your wish is his command. |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
SOOO beautiful, Nancy! Missing those holding times more than any thing else. Hopfully...someday I will find a guy that would love to just hold me. Hugs for this one! ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren~The reward was very tender..thank you. Marge~What a beautiful thing for Bill to say to you...how lovely that thought! You are a very lucky lady! Hi Sue!~Let's just say my wish was granted. ![]() Becka~Thank you and I hope your someday is soon! Hugs. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
LOVED it very nice! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, you capture my own heart's desire this night - to just be held and comforted - such a lovely, heart felt piece - ![]() If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like an excellent idea...James |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very lovely Nancy..thank you.. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how very lovely and precious this is...loved this, thank you for sharing. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully expressed Tinker. Your words have been missed here. I'm so glad to read them again. A hug..just for you. ![]() believe in what your heart feels... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
This man would have to be an idiot if you had to ask him twice to hold you. enjoyed ___________ice/ford ><> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy, it is so ding dang wonderful to be reading your poetry this beautiful spring day. At times I have felt exactly as you have expressed so eloquently and with such emotion. You haven't lost your touch, Dear Poetess! Sending you a great big affectionate hug, Linda |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Writing just as poignant as it comes, m'dear. Your skill and art in painting tales of love are so well done. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
such a simple gesture, with a monumental impact nice to see your words again |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you all once again so much... ![]() Sending big Easter bunny hugs out to all my friends at PiP!! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
...Hold me... Words that echo around the world. The simplicity of this is exquisite! miscellanea |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my dear sweet Nancy, Gary and I know these exact feelings.....just to hold and be held is so wonderful at times. Love just flows through the two who are in love. This hopeless romantic loves your poems of romance. I miss you, my friend. Hugs, ![]() |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Been missing your poetry Nancy - this is wonderful and much enjoyed. Your writing is something special - Paul |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
When I saw this again, I realized I hadn't saved it in my library! Glad I can send it to the top again. It is wonderful to read it once again! miscellanea |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
O, of course Nancy. Of course, Of course... Jaime |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Oh yes, what an excelent feeling. I love it! Nice write. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
This brings wonderfull feelings to my heart and mind.Reminds me of one of my favorite things! I can truly relate. adagio |
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