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Open Poetry #35

I Am (challenge)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-03-19 09:31 PM

I Am

I value a soft
and tender heart.

I desire the hope and
passion found in my
sweethearts kiss.

When evening comes
I feel very alone.

While apart, she is
the angel I miss.

JamesLee
March19
2005

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2005-03-19 09:41 PM

Oh James . . .

she is who you are (or at least half of it)
this was beautiful, what a fresh approach.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-03-19 09:50 PM

what a heart you have

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2005-03-20 02:20 AM

"I value a soft
and tender heart"
and that's a very good thing for all the world's hearts

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-03-20 04:01 AM

I value a soft
and tender heart."

~ You value in others what you yourself possess.

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-20-2005 04:48 AM).]

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