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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-03-17 07:18 AM


she is candy bars
feeding mouths

that were clouds
before the wind
changed their faces

her breasts are heavy
with milk that leaks

down the mountains
of old baldy
frozen to his beard

but she don't mind
his lap tickle tree tops
they are better than the sand

another lover impressed
when she stirred february's ocean

and peed in neptune's ale

_____
dark



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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-03-17 07:37 AM


hehe, only you could write such parallel...tremendous visions here....loved this
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-03-17 10:14 AM


*giggle* you delight the senses and smile me, D -

Morning S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-03-17 10:18 AM


chuckling....
delightful dark....

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2005-04-21 09:56 PM


shes cum and gone now
tell me about april, before may cums round again

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2005-04-21 10:01 PM


another fine write
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california
6 posted 2005-04-22 01:14 AM





  

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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