Open Poetry #34 |
day 247 doom |
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
day 247 doom I hear so many echoes in this room From all these poets shouting down their doom Some throw up angry words in great dismay Perhaps to keep their demons well at bay And others write of counting price and cost Of living with the loves they've won and lost I hear so many echoes in this room From all these poets shouting down their doom Some give up secrets of their many lives They could not tell their husbands or their wives And others write confused and so obscure Their words will not be helpful as a cure I hear so many echoes in this room From all these poets shouting down their doom Some store up lines then spew them in a burst As if to cast out spells that have them cursed And others chronical the worst of fears That haunt them now and will for many years I hear so many echoes in this room From all these poets shouting down their doom |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am one shouting, yes, I admit a good write here, thought-provoking indeed |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*whispering* I hear you sir..and understand. This is exceptional! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
And in those voices of cry and hue we find a symphony to add our cries to - and in a chorus we chant out our depths, leaving smiles, cringes, and tears having been wept - Gotta love the ruckus - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How true..how true.. Here we can let it all out...the good, the bad and the ugly. And, there is always someone to listen. Love this keeper! Hugs~Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Kraw...not what I expected. And here all the time I thought I whispered! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow, this is one helluva write, Krawdad, I think you've written some very true and fine lines here. |
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