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On The Waking
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On The Waking |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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On The Waking ~*Marge Tindal*~  Sometimes on the waking before Moon has kissed Sun I wander to the meadow to gaze the night, now done~ I gaze in awesome wonder as He presents to me A kaleidoscope of colors rich in paint of masterpiece~ With a gentle splash of gold tinged in shaded mauve The glow of night curtseys to the dawn in rising pause~ For just one shushing moment they marry the sky in celebration Moon and Sun illuminate the palette My joy is true elation~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Beautiful pic and words. Enjoyed this. ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
For me, one word comes to mind after reading this, hope. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Marge - this is beyond lovely - sooo nice - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful very inspiring |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Many a time I have sit and marveled as night began its travel across the scarlet sky of twilight. Right now I'm listening to an indian group called Brule. This picture somehow goes with the gentle music. Hugs BonBon  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
These moments you share are the treasure of a long unbroken chain of souls. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful as always Marge.. But this one is special...very special. Heart hugs~Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
*sigh* just beautiful.. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, This is as pretty as you.  |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is wonderful and so uplifting! I know the feeling! I sometimes stay up at 5:00 a.m. to watch the day unfold. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and this poem, so beautiful in presentation and feel...is elation in itself. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is just beautiful Marge. Love ya, Betty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ You make it easy for me to want to do MORE~ Thank you ... thank you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Very nice....what a spectacle to behold! hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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