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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-11-12 01:51 PM

A Perfect Fit

childhood has a past comfort
there was a time someone
carefully wrapped you up tight
pulling in all the rough edges
and tucked it all in
maybe once again you
have found another someone
(tonight) let me be the one
to cover you completely
fold all these places where
space has held the cold
was I born too late
sewn together in pieces
and I could have missed you
but look where I am now
for time can find you
the perfect quilt

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-11-12 02:07 PM

but look where I am now
for time can find you
the perfect quilt

outstanding Helen!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-11-12 02:38 PM

yes, that's so true

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-11-12 06:19 PM

Oh, I do like the layers of this...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-11-12 06:32 PM

Wonderful Helen!!!!
Very very much enjoyed!
hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

5 posted 2004-12-29 11:12 PM

Ahh Warmth

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2004-12-30 12:29 PM

"there was a time someone
carefully wrapped you up tight
pulling in all the rough edges
and tucked it all in"

Yes, once there was such a time...such a person.

*smile*

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2004-12-30 07:29 PM

This is nicely written! Enjoyed~

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2005-01-19 10:24 PM

Time happens in pieces....and some do get sewn together in ways that no one would believe but the person who owns that particular kaleid of it.....

And you are right, there are times (such an odd way to say it) when time doesn't matter at all....as you already knew, of course.

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