Open Poetry #34 |
between the extremes |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Climbing her own ladder she extends herself skyward, counting constellations her fingers tap the keeper's gate, as feet sleep sideways in beds of gathered seasons, rounding the womb of her trunk, i hide myself deep in the vines, finding sanctuary within,as i wander between the extremes. . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh Michele, I felt the depths of this one gal...many layers here..sending heart hugs your way dear one... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is a comfortable place there for women like us, yes good write here M, got me thinking |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
breathtaking !!! ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What goes up, must come down. The higher the highs, the lower the lows. Bi-polarity is a roller coaster ride ~ but those who have this condition are never, ever boring! In fact, they on average, have a higher IQ than the rest of the population! They are stars! ~ Sometimes shooting! Sometimes falling! ~ but always fascinating! I commend you on an exceptionally beautiful poem from the inside ~ out! Loving hugs, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Michele....you and your words. Well done! Hugs~Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Your life is a journey intended for your joy. Live it to the fullest. JL |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
truly, you've a gift - this is lovely- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very well done ma'am... indeed. layers of thought and meaning one can draw from it... bravo.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Another Wow, another Keeper. Maree. into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed your words |
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