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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Someone is burning leaves; the best smell of Fall, childhood memories in the air: toys, boys who never die in wars that end by supper time, a bicycle ridden to where you live... Someone is burning leaves. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Perhaps the sense of smell is one of the under-rated ones but it sure does bring back memories if we pay it enough attention as you have done here. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that is the smell that brings about all memory |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your words carry me back to another time... very well done. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Huan Yi Well done I copy. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh yes! A trip back in time.. to a happier world. Thank you. Hugs~Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
The sense of smell is most valuable to recollection and anticipation. Well done. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful smell of beautiful season beautiful memories of beautiful reason beautiful poem of marvelous person Beautiful time for innocent treason enjoyed as you can see. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'd like to thank Drauntz very much--I had no idea that there was this much I had not read of you. mea culpa lovie  Not one of my very most favorites of yours, but it's good. danke'  |
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