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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-10-24 01:05 AM

Daena

You will never
see her again,

the woman for whom
you opened a door,

yet she will stroll the streets
on which you live,
sit close beside you in any car.

She will matter
more than all the others
you'll ever know.
Years will pass
and she'll be there,

because in those eyes
you saw her smile,

because for a moment
she made you whole.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-10-24 01:10 AM

The last lines strike the cord - well done-

Susan

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2004-10-24 01:22 AM

your poems make me sad.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-10-24 07:03 AM

Very nice.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2004-10-24 08:26 PM

The heart remembers what the mind will not.

You are a lovely poet.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-10-25 04:42 AM

I love your style and theme

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-10-25 09:11 AM

John~
What a wistful piece ... yes, the heart always remembers~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

7 posted 2004-10-25 09:54 AM

Poignant, beautiful movements here.

Thank you

~P

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-10-25 11:26 AM

tremendously romantic and honest....

loved this a lot

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2004-10-25 11:27 AM

John, a touching write...

...She will matter
more than all the others...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2004-10-25 12:19 PM

Yes this happens!

Beautifully rendered.

Love, Margherita

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

11 posted 2007-05-14 11:55 PM

"you" will never see her again but "you" will for sure see her soul again in a better form if "you" are try to find her again. Truly. no matter whose "Daena"

enjoyed the one of your few love poems

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