Open Poetry #34 |
Roland |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
In the end and regardless... we needn't make sense. It's enough... against all fact or consequence to be at least as then perhaps might be the worthy difference as breaks the cynic spell. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I thought I was with you all the way, but I only made it half way. Something twisted my brain and turned it inside out with the second half, well, mostly the third stanza made me feel I was one brick short of a load. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
is this saying to exist is enough reason to exist? regardless of what becomes of us, we exist that is enough not to be cynical? yeah, twisting my brain, but thats good exercise |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
close a door, open one. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think so, too John... At least, I force myself to think that. M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I think each one individual has a sole purpose and journey in this life....and will inevidably fulfill it, reagarless if we realize it or not? Is this what you said? |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
how I love this one. to get into another cycle and again. enjoyed |
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