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Vesuvius (Cpat and littlewing) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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explosions rain a parade of molten butterscotch melding hip and thigh alive in melt to boil over this craggy embankment drenching skin soul with dull ache 'till embers of fiery snowflakes tears released shroud the hovering masses with madness, and surround gentle slopes that grow at peak with such surges of pressure as build and the bitter cold of my breath be tempered by the changes such rumbling as these reveal How can these eruptions of you remind me there is always a void and cracked seams waiting to be filled |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful write! Eric |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
my, that's lovely... awesome you two! **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! this explodes with imagery! Another great dynamite duet. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
EXCELLENT!! Very much enjoyed!! ~Hugs to you both~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Very nicely done! enjoyed. ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you everyone, Ron carried this write. It has been such a pleasure writing with him. Thank you guys and thanks Ron. See you guys next week. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
How can these eruptions of you remind me there is always a void and cracked seams waiting to be filled Liked how this built to conclusion and you two weave well together |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you two braiding words is awesome. Well done. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
AHA! The ever requested encore! I see you both a bit more distinctly here |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ya'll know as well as I do... this again is Sue's construction and my editing... this one just has a few more insertions by me..lol.. which is why Ed can see the differences.... Sue.. was a pleasure to write with you ma'am.... enjoyed the experience.... now, get back in here and take a bow |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
How can these eruptions of you remind me there is always a void and cracked seams waiting to be filled What a blending! you guys blend well together, it's always a pleasure to read you both  Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wowsers! This is great - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, take a bow... both of you! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you everyone, and Ron? Plbbbbt! This was you! *smile* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
bumping this to the top Suzie, cuz I can... and cuz it deserves it.  Now, I've had my daily dose of Suzie and Cpat....to start my day. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I normally don't like butterscotch but I'll make an exception for the both of you...yummy  and sue where the heck are ya!? If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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