Open Poetry #34 |
Shekhinah |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
To watch her walk across a room becomes.. a thought in the way she glides carries a poetry more than words,... beyond all lines of supple rhyme. And wonder why you should be paused,... man of steel in the real world. Why her eyes, when they follow yours, make you feel like such a fool. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sigh |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
i really like your poetry. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Derrick, I think it more accurate to say you like how I don’t get in the way of poetry. Very hard thing to do, and I usually fail. John |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this brings warm sighs and magic to the mind..soothing write |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You write like a god worthy of a goddess... Love & Light, EA |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very nice John. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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