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Open Poetry #34

Remembrance

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-11-08 08:18 PM

Eventually
this is all one has
of the long strong column
sweating down the road.

The captain in front
with a cane he doesn't need.
Sounds of boots,
their dusty notes in unison.

A short time sergeant
staying out of the sun.

Watching
man by man
marching on

mile by mile
through the tiger hour.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2004-11-09 07:58 PM

Eventually
this is all one has
of the long strong column
sweating down the road.

The captain in front
with a cane he doesn't need.
Sounds of boots,
their dusty notes in unison.

I could see this in my mind's eye, so vividly. Great write.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-05-15 12:11 PM

war,war,war means sadness and death.

though you did not say it. But I see it.

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