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Open Poetry #34

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-11-09 01:54 PM

Now
my father,...
freed from age,...
hunts a woods
of oak and elm

where wild boar root among the leaves
to seek
what food
there is to find

The sun goes down:
on summer fields
where wheat still grows
as tall as men,

on slender girls
with secret smiles...

for one
who’s young...
and strong again

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-11-09 02:26 PM

and there is.....

simply heartwrenching but hopeful words which deliver us unto another world.

Enjoyed!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-11-09 04:31 PM

Very heartfelt.
Wonderful write.

JL

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-11-09 04:34 PM

Very much enjoyed the read John.
Hugs~Nancy

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

4 posted 2004-11-09 08:30 PM

I love this!!

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2004-11-09 08:51 PM

Such a sweet poem...wonderful!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-05-15 12:13 PM

is this how "you" remembers "Your" father?

interesting.

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