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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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I'm as much... in the land of Duh as I was before. I feel myself...losing words. Soon... except for a laugh... I won't be able to think at all. I miss you. Please come home. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I like the short bluntness to this. No drama or overly played emotions, just a "please." Well done... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i dont know what to take from this, doesnt really seem its as "needy and simple" as it first appears. "except for a laugh" are we talking madness, or joy?  i like being confused by layers even if my own mind put them there |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I do hope your request is granted. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Has a daydream sound, gazing out a window watching your thoughts pass by. Very nice read. JL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I feel myself...losing words. Soon... except for a laugh... I won't be able to think at all." Enjoyed this..left me to ponder..and that's a good thing. Hugs~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I have met up with the land of Duh... This is wonderful in it's clarity and brevity. TD |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a poem of love...full of love without "love" marvelous sir. |
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