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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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He never warmed up for this and every few seconds he slips off key, reminding everyone he's nothing special. Raw, because it leaves no room for stoic interpretations. And there are no excuses when he falls flat on his face. This is why I love acoustic grace. He was a man of sorrows |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
GG, I love this write of yours... as though we are conversing. I, too, love acoustic grace. K |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done ma'am.. the metaphor adding several layers to the readers possible interpretation of the depths... enjoy reading you... even if I do not say so often... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Enough strings to cover the senses, but the chords demand proper timing and stroke. Great metaphor and as equal is the write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alyssa~ I am sitting here *smiling* at the beauty of your writing~ YOU are growing ... and with it comes much pleasure for the reader~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful metaphor!! I so much enjoy reading you! Hugs~Nancy Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
GG Your elegance is no surprise. Well done. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling at the depths of this Alyssa.  The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gadzooks! Good Going, GG Girl! Great write! May your life be full of sweet acoustics and grace!  Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The title drew me in... and I'm so glad! *S* This is wonderful! *S* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
reminding me of sitting and listening to the acoustic guitar, so beautiful and how the one who played never thought they were any good. This really made me smile, Alyssa. Thank you. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
l@ved this Alyssa, reminds me both of a fragile looking Kurt during Nirvana's unplugged as well as brings back memories of jamming with friends. hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and this is why I love you  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile and you just nailed it. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Yet another beautiful write from you Alyssa. I hope all is well in your life. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
A lovely write, enjoyed it very much! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I seem to have this habit lately of hardly ever being around, and forgetting to repy. Forgive me, folks. Please. You have no idea how much your words mean to me! ... Kahlill, thank you. I'm glad you liked it, and understand. Also glad you read and replied!Cpat, Glad you got that, I wanted a lot of possible layers to this. Actually I think most people saw a different aspect then what I did, but that's alright. Good, even. Thank you for your words Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Mark, he thought came to me out of the blue, really... and for the most part, it wrote itself from there. Glad ya liked! Thanks much Marge, You do know how to compliment I sure hope I'm growing... into what I should be, that is. Thank you for the inspiration to keep trying.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Nancy, Thank you I love reading you, too! ...Just wish I could get in here more often.Sey, you're just a charmer.. y'know that? Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Gentle Spirit, you're so kind, thank you much dear lady Linda, lol you always have so much energy..! A life of acoustics and grace would be nice, wouldn't it? Thank you Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Eric, no lying in the future, okay? This isn't even on the same scale as perfect! Thank you, though.  suthern, I knew the title first, then just had to work a poem around it, lol... thanks for your reply Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Sue, I'm glad this brought a smile and good memories to you Basically a single acoustic guitar is what I was thinking of too, and how honest, open, and raw that sound is. Glad you understood Raph, hey there, thanks for your words. Weird how the good and the painful can fit so closely together. hugs... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dix, I love you, too Ser, means a lot. Thanks you.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Sue, Thank you And I hope all is well in yours. Wish I could be around more to read you...Tex, Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, and I love this one, Alyssa! Love it! .....jo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
had to bump this back up top. a favourite |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Jo, Raph, Dix, You guys are all FAR too cool. I love ya each And thank you bunches! Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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