Open Poetry #34 |
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At the End of Your Rope |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
At the End of Your Rope Your cliffs are shards of bone protruding through salt grass sprigs, where winter has tarnished your sands and stone. Your abandoned shore and harbor now alone… Cry-out to your gods in your dilution. Calculate your electronic solution. Sing your pixie songs of lore. Here them echo: “No one is listening, anymore…” The elect have gone home, not a mysterious parting. Nevertheless, from this adventures very beginning, this story told to all, and free for the willing. Words drifting from storm to storm, dragged across neglected places in desperation for agreeable faces... Yet, none were there to join the golden graces. Only whispering voices, and glimpses of soured deliberation. No virtue of tried or prolific traces… Yet, a salted tear will ferret you out, intense compassion in a shout. In that one last hope. At the end of your rope… |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Words drifting from storm to storm, dragged across neglected places in desperation for agreeable faces... ~*~ JL...all of your poem is wonderful... some of your lines are extra special. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write JL. Very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
“No one is listening, anymore…” ~ but I am listening to you through your expressive poetry... Love & Light, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this is a wonderful write, I enjoyed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
splendid! |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Yet, a salted tear will ferret you out, intense compassion in a shout." nicely salted ferreting, JL |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah yes, - in the end it is given away - ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Yet, none were there to join the golden graces. Only whispering voices, and glimpses of soured deliberation. No virtue of tried or prolific traces… mmmm, mmmm...outstanding penning friend enjoyed this immensly |
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