Open Poetry #34 |
Professor Hemingway |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
The fact is, Herr Doktur, one eventually learns... that freedom’s a function of inattention. An appreciation, finally, that no one is actually listening, or, therefore, authentically cares, absolving you to do as you will short of murder or anything stupid like walking naked... across the field while a game is being played upsetting the chance to score. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn I love your style! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
somebody paid attention |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I love it! You have a GREAT eye for the real! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"to do as you will short of murder or anything stupid" kinda narrowed things down a bit haven't you? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
wouldn't that make "anything stupid" a function of inattention as well?? "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nice write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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