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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2004-11-07 12:18 PM



this is where I live

the center
of it all

simply
lying in bed

breathing in
breathing out


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EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2004-11-07 12:20 PM


This is very interesting...the title makes me wonder if there is a biblical reference hidden within the words?
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2 posted 2004-11-07 01:03 AM


intriguing write...

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3 posted 2004-11-07 05:26 AM


sometimes it's all one can do
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4 posted 2007-05-15 12:41 PM


"life is such a marvelous thing just by go with your lungs willings"

I agree 100% on the "quote"

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