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Open Poetry #34

Jerzy

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-11-06 05:46 PM

Hi.

My name?
It’s...
of no consequence.

Here’s
a picture
of my girl.

You,
or something like you,
met her
one night
when she was thirteen....

You don’t
remember....

I do...

Be afraid

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

1 posted 2004-11-06 08:18 PM

intriguingly disturbing storyline. compels the reader to ponder

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-11-06 08:48 PM

John~
Interestingly mysterious~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-11-06 09:10 PM

very cool write

that last line said it all

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-05-15 12:44 PM

read and confused. There are at least 10 stories in those words just by cut in different ways.

what a poet!!!!! trapped in midnight..it is me.

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