Open Poetry #34 |
Jerzy |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Hi. My name? It’s... of no consequence. Here’s a picture of my girl. You, or something like you, met her one night when she was thirteen.... You don’t remember.... I do... Be afraid |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
intriguingly disturbing storyline. compels the reader to ponder |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ Interestingly mysterious~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool write that last line said it all |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
read and confused. There are at least 10 stories in those words just by cut in different ways. what a poet!!!!! trapped in midnight..it is me. |
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